Tuesday, October 31, 2006

Halloween


Halloween is day when all childrens dress up and trick or treat for fun. That day is celbrated at the last night of October. All childrens are preparing themselves for this wonderful day, dressing up of monster, and spooky creatures. Halloween and Christmas are considered the best days in the year.

What I think of Halloween is that is a great day, but especially for all little kids in the city. All the kids are happy this day because they are excited to show to their little friends their customs. The little kids trick or treat like from 4:00PM till 7:30-8:00PM, but more older persons trick or treat or have fun in the streets like from 8:00-12:00. And you know what?, That day is today so enjoy it!!!!

Thursday, October 26, 2006

What a Big Problem

Knock, Knock, Knock! "The door" said Sofi.

" You're going to be late for the soccer game!" said Sofi's mom.

The three were in Sofia's house, they were called Sofia, Andrea, and Sara. They were preparing for the soccer game, but first they were trying to solve they nervous, because that same day the were going to choose the soccer team that was going to play. They had slept in Sofi's house, so they could go all four together to the soccer game
...Riiinnnnggg!... The telephone rang, "Mom, answer it, it might be for you!" said Sofi.

"Ok" answered her mom. They were in the door, until "Sofi!" her mom called.

"what?" Sofi aswered,

"The soccer game is translated to Punta Iguana, a town very far from here" said Sofi's mom

"What?!" Sofi answered,

"The bus is picking you up in twenty min, ok?" said Sofi's mom, "Ok mommy!"...

Twenty minutes had passed and the bus wasn't there. The soccer game was about to start, and if we are not there we loose!...Five min. later the bus was there. Everyone was nervous, because that day they were going to choose the team, and because we were late and we were going to loose. In the bus everyone was talking about the soccer team, of who they were going to choose, and everyone said Sofi was going to be in the soccer team but what about Andrea, and Sara? Sofi always said to them

"Don't worry, belive me that you are going to be in the team." That leaved them more calm. They were almost in Punta Iguana after about twenty minutes of jurney, almost all the persons in the bus were sleep. Andrea, and Sara were sleep, but it seemed something was bothering Sofi.

Finally they were in the other school, it was called East High. It seemed it was a good school. We entered and the first thing everybody saw was the faces of all dose students, they were looking all the soccer team so bad! They were in the soccer field, it was in good conditions, but it was too little comparing it with the soccer field of our school. But really it was normal size when you saw it very closely. They told us to prepare fast because we've present there very late. The soccer game was at 8:30, and it was 9:15. Everyone prepared very fast. Riiinnnnggg! The referee was saying to come. Everyone was there, except... Our coach!, were is our coach?!?! Everyone started looking for him except Sofi. She was strange. She was like no matter what happens, like be quet and change of subject.

The soccer game was stopped. Everyone was looking in every place they thought our coach should be. They were asking themselves.

"Our coach cam with us?", "Where is he?," or "Why are we not starting the game?" Everyone was like frustrating! Andrea asked Sofi if she knew something about our coach and Sofi answered.

"Oh, are you talking about our coach, oh, is that I saw him but I don't know." Everyone had seen the strange attitude. Riiinnngg! Sofi's cellphone rang... Riiinnnggg!...

"Why don't you answer it?" Sara asked,

"Because dose are persons bothering!"Sofi aswered. Andrea feeled that Sofi really wanted to play but something didn't let her. Andrea knew that something strange was happening, so she went toward the referee. She told the referee that they had lost lost because of the coach problem, and when Sofia heard what Andrea said she went toward Andrea and told her the truth. The truth was that at first when the soccer game was in theirs school, she promised Mr. Gonazales, the coach, she was going to pick him. So the problem was that Sofi forgot to pick the coach. At first everybody was mad at her, but not mad because she forgot to pick the coach, they were mad because she didn't say at first and we could have time to play, and not loose the final soccer game. Sofi tried to solve a little bit the problem, and called Mr. Gonzales, and told him to come to Punta Iguana fast so we could play. Thing had been changed. Now anybody was mad at Sofi. The referee said okay, because that could happen to anyone.

Still Mr. Gonzales wasn't there, but we needed to start the game, so the referee get us start. The game started, and just when it started, Mr. Gonzales was there. He motibated us for the rest of the soccer game, Sofi appologize him, and you know what?..............................................THEY WOONN 2-0!!!....

Saturday, October 14, 2006

My School...

My school's name is Jorge Washington, which in english is George Washington. It was named like that in honor of USA's first president, George Washington. He was a police, miltar, and ate the same time a president. Of what I know for me he was USA´s best president.

My class has 20-21 students. All of the years and all the classes are about the same amount of students. I know you might be telling to yourself that is a little amount, but believe for us is sufissient. Our class is a great class in which we help each other. We treat us each other almost like brothers. Obvously because we've all together since 1st grade, and some since Pre Kinder or Kinder. I'm in this school since Kinder like the most of my friends too.

Our school way is till 12 grade. Maybe you should think that´s a lng way. Maybe it is but some friends say is short, or is normal, although other schools are till 11 grade. But really I think is better until 12 grade, because is another year of learning wonderful things. Some persons say me 12 grade is the best year. Really I believe does persons who told methat, because is the last year and we all do wonderful things because we need to celebrate or last year together.

Let´s talk about my teachers. I think all the teachers I´ve got are great techers and cool teachers, here they are:
1st grade: Ms Rachel
2nd grade: Ms Galy
3rd grade: Ms Wagner
4rth grade: Mr Baneth
5th grade: Mr A and Ms Caro
6th grade: Ms Hall
7th grade: Ms hall
All of them where and are super cool!

Our school day lasts 8 hours. From 7am until 2:30pm. It might hear long but they pass super fast! The class that passes faster for me, is Math. Really I don't know why, but maybe because is my best subject.

In my school there is a Cafeteria where you can buy your food. Sometimes I feel privilage because some shcools don't sell snacks, only healthy food! I might never survive there, although this last months I've not ate too much snacks.

Really I think my school is cool, but its a little tiny. I think the past years of of our parents argueing had helped us. That problem will finish because we are going to move. And they have shown us like the way the school will going to be, and it looks great! Besides of the problem, that really is not a big problem because we've survived 7 years with that school, Jorge Washington is the best school ever!

Friday, October 13, 2006

A Party Almost Ruined...

It was my cousing's birthday. We were trying to have all preparated, but obviously without she knowing. It was a surprise party! We needed to buy the (1) cake, candles, balloons, coke, plates, cups, etc. It had to be a great party because she had been a great person with all of us. She had a older sister called Daniella. She helped us alot buying all the things. We went either (2)by car, by bus, or walking. What matter was that we needed to buy all dose things fast! We need to go and look for a taxi because any of our moms could took us to the place we want them to take us. We looked for a taxi (3) with air conditioning, fast, and in good conditions. Finally we founded the taxi. We were in way...

When we were there the first thing I saw was a bear that(4)it jump, it sing, and it move its right hand! It was super cute. I thought to give her that little bear, she would be super happy! So I bought the little bear for my cousing, but we were looking for the paper for packing the presents. We couldn't find it in any place but finally we found it! (5)Under a pile of little cars, we found the paper. We were so excited because now we could pack the presents.

We were back home.(6)Very fast in a taxi, but safe. We had all of the things prepared, and the best part was that my cousing didn't have any idea of what we were going to do to her.The say says(7)When there´s nobody that wants anythings to go wrong, everything will go how you expected. And I think that was what was happening to us everything was going excellent!...My telephone rang, nobody answer. I was shouting so they answer the telephone because I was dressing for the party.RING, RING...The telephone continued ringing. I went running to answer it,"hello" i said, "hi naty, is alejandra" I was in shok, my cousing fr what she was calling to me?!"somebody told me you were doing me a surprise party, I'm sorry if I ruin your plans, is that I was thinkink to go to the place you told me, acting if I didn't knew anything, but really I can't do that to you, so I'm here telling you the thruth and hope you tell me the truth"... They were like 5 seconds in silence, i breaked the silence saying (8)"yes, is true but let's continue the party like if anything of this had happened. Let's go there have fun and celebrate your birthday!", "ok", she answered me.

We were all in the party. Although someone tryed to ruin the party, we all had a good time. If you're asking to yourself what happened to the little bear I gave to her, she was so happy when she saw it!



Key:
(1)Series of objects: Use commas to separate three or more items in a series.
(2)Series of phrases: Use commas to separate three or more phrases in a serie.
(3)Series of modifiers:Use commas to separate three or more modifiers in a series.
(4)Series of independent clauses: Use commas to separate three or more short independent clauses in a series.
(5)Introductory prepositional phrases: Use a comma after a prepositional phrase of four or more words at the beginning of a sentence.
(6)Introductory participial phrase: Use a comma after a participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence.
(7)Introductory adverb clause: Use a comma after an adverb clause ate the beginning of a sentence.
(8)Introductory yes, no, or interjection: Use a comma to separate yes, no, and interjections, such as oh and well, from the rest of the sentence.

Saturday, October 07, 2006

...My Class...


I'm in 7A. So far 7A had been a good class. It is a class were classmated help each other. We help each other with the problems we have. I think for another person would be the perfect classroom. Although for me it is. We're are all unified childrens.

Really I need to accept there are some things I don't like of my classroom. Dose things are, when a teacher puts a subject which I don't like. Is that I have a problem, if really the thing the teaher is talking about is not interesting for me, I can not concentrate for all the class. I like, pass all the class in the clouds thinking in another thing. But really that is not so much a bad problem. In class almost all the things they teach us are interesing.

What I most like of my classroom are my friends. When I just think that at a some time we will not be unified again because we need to go to the univertity makes me sad. Only thinking that I will not see them again, is terrible. All the things we've all passed together, are wonderful, which I never going to forget. For me the best part o being in school are, studidyng(obviously) to be each time a better person, and having friends.

Without this things I don't know I've being doing right know....Really who agrees with me?

Thursday, October 05, 2006

...My Problems...


What I think of problems, is that is a normal thing. Everyone has problems. Including me, I'm all the times having problems, with my brother, my aunt, my cousin, and also my mom...(he he he)

Really my problems are like strange, they are not really problems, they are like not serious problems. For example we start fighting for a dumb thing. The way I deal my problems is like, for example if my brother takes a pen without permission I just said to give it back, and if he says he won't, I will just call my mom or dad to take away my pen from him, and the most of the time he doesn't gives it back, my mom or dad just buy me one. See that my problems are not very serious? They are like little problems that will be solved at 5 minutes!

I need to realize that I always use bad habits. I shout to my brother, throw the things, is that he makes me mad of the things he does. His name is Andres Felipe, and he is 15 years old. I'm always mad at him! But at the end we are very good brothers(hehe)

Most of the times my brother uses some estrategies to make me more mad, or make that my parents punish me. Some they work, but not all. I also do some estrategies, but really, because they are always the same, they don't work at all. My estrategies are like shout, tell to my parents, or stay in my room with the door locked. See that they are not so good strategies? Really I need to sit and think for more :p

I can still remember the day when I was in my Grandma's house with my little cousings and with my little dog. My cousings were playing with a little plastic ball(beach ball) and in a moment my dog escaped and went , to a place but I didn' know were. When I just heard my cousing crying I went running toward him. When I was there I asked what happened and he told me his little plastic ball was broken. I just imagine my dog exploting it so I went running looking for my dog. I was sure that my dog was who exploted the ball, so I went running and hide. (I was just like 8-9 years old) I heard my aunt talking to my little cousing, and I thought she was going to punish me so when she wasn't looking I hide what was left of the ball. The first thing they told me when they bought my dog was that I need to take care of her. I went running and tell my aunt that, that was my brother who brake it, because I was scared that they were going to give my puppy to another person. When my brother knew that I told that he went mad at me like for a month. But really he had the right to be mad at me, what I did to him was a very bad thing... Time pssed an I appologyze my brother and we were happy bagain to each other.
Every girl that has brothers or sisters know what I´m talking about, because I know this have happen to you, don't even dare to say "That's never happened to me."(hehe)